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Nice render but it would have been much more dynamic if you had them drawn in a portrait-of-a-canvass. They're four so it's best if they were built asymmetric. Consider the subject of the piece as well. You're a designer so take some time asking yourself what the subject is. When I saw this, the first thing I asked myself was "why are they grouped under a tree?" Proximity and repetition emphasizes , yes? But in this art, the one that is different, the contrast, is the subject of the piece. I also see a lot of vertical leading lines here - the atmospheric light drawn by the rays of the sun; the grains from the bark of the tree; the posture of the individuals in the outer regions; arch of the hill where the individuals stand. It was commendable how you thorough the lead lines but they should have been used in a better sense. In design, we call all lead lines as convergence lines. Since you're using a tree as a focal area, find a way where you sell your characters employing the parts of the tree; use leaves and even grass if possible. Bath the characters with a rays of light so they become introduced to the audience. Always bear in mind the principles of design; the Principles of creative and successful illustration. International standards guide us in our work.
btw. I also drew a sketch concept for this but it would be rude of me to place the link here am just a random deviant.
btw. I also drew a sketch concept for this but it would be rude of me to place the link here am just a random deviant.